Sometimes you have some amazing adventures you just have to tell everyone about. Read the rest of this account here.
I just wanted to go home and I was determined more than anything to try. It was becoming a human rights issue, keeping me locked up like that for no reason. I pounded on the door a few more times and then stood next to it, waiting. Sure enough, the door opened a crack and I stuck my foot in it and pushed it open wide. I couldn’t tell in the dark which woman it was in front of me but I pushed past her and I was free.
Actually, I was in the hallway. Here, there was a bit more light from a lamp burning on the wall. The woman behind me let out a cry and started saying something really fast. Another woman, a young one, appeared at the end of the hall, blocking my path. She held out her hands and seemed to be pleading for me to stop.
I don’t know what she was thinking as I—a huge, bearded foreigner—bore down on her. I was running on adrenaline and I hip-checked her out of the way and dove through the open door. I almost blush to think about it now. I’ve never pushed a woman before, except maybe my sister when we were young, but I was frantic and just wanted to get out of there.
The streets outside were deserted, although another woman was sitting on the landing by the door where I came out. She was older and didn’t get up when I came out, although she shrieked at me something awful. I ignored her and ran down the road, heading back up the valley towards the trees where I had come from. Forget cool experiences; I was done.
The bright light was still visible through the trees, although the loud screaming sound had stopped and the ball lightning was all gone, thank goodness. I still figured it was a concert or something going on up there and I pushed my way through the trees and underbrush, trying to go around the clearing with the stone circle. If they were as crazy as the women I had met, they’d just grab me and put me back in the room. I wasn’t going back; I was sure of that.
I got close to the clearing and the light became so strong I could pick my way through the bushes as if it were daylight. I got to the far edge of the clearing and looked back.
It wasn’t a concert. There was a group of women standing in a semi-circle, close to the stone circle, but not too close. The whole stone circle was bathed in a brilliant pale light that shot up in the sky like a searchlight, although I couldn’t tell where the light was coming from. The stone itself, I guess. On the stone circle was a woman. She looked about middle-aged and was wearing what looked like animal skins and a shimmering purple veil that framed her face and fell down the front of her dress.
I was just about to move on and make a break for the mountain pass when the woman looked directly at me. It was weird, but for a moment I forgot about going up the valley and found myself walking towards her, out into the clearing. The assembled women noticed me before too long and I heard a few gasps that sounded like terror. That didn’t make me feel any better. The woman kept looking at me and smiled.
This is an adventure? part of me said, trying to reassure the rest of me.
I’m an idiot, the rest of me said, as I kept walking.
February 4th, 2013 at 9:02 pm
Half expecting them to put him in a crock over an open fire 😀
February 4th, 2013 at 11:23 pm
Hmm, well I guess there’s time. 🙂
February 5th, 2013 at 3:52 am
This is EXASPERATING!!! What IS this?!?!?!? 🙂
February 5th, 2013 at 8:01 pm
Hm, I seem to be inspiring this reaction in others too. Maybe I’d better post the installments more than once a week. 🙂
February 5th, 2013 at 12:22 pm
You’re stringing me by my thumbs while I am with a full bladder – so, what next? Hurry 🙂
February 5th, 2013 at 8:03 pm
Hmm, maybe I’d better post these quicker, before you fly over here and beat the story out of me. 🙂
February 6th, 2013 at 10:23 pm
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February 11th, 2013 at 1:05 pm
I’m not entirely sure what’s going on here, but I’m intrigued. I like the ritualistic aspect of it. Your character is out of sorts, too! What can it be??
February 11th, 2013 at 9:15 pm
All will become clear eventually, I hope. 🙂
February 16th, 2013 at 3:50 pm
its an amazing story in making david! just cant wait to read the next part, glad that its already up 🙂