March 23, 2014

Fog Tweets

Fog Tweets

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I am a writer of anything quirky and weird. I love most genres of fiction and in each there are stories that I would consider "my kind of story". View all posts by David Stewart

This entry was posted on Sunday, March 23rd, 2014 at 10:10 pm and tagged with Alastair's Photo Fiction, creepy, fear, fiction, flash fiction, fog, forest, ghosts, horror, Twitter and posted in Dark. You can follow any responses to this entry through the RSS 2.0 feed.

19 responses to “Fog Tweets”

Miles Rost
March 23rd, 2014 at 10:35 pm

*blink* Da hell did I just read?

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- David Stewart
  March 23rd, 2014 at 10:36 pm
  
  something different 🙂 so, do you think he’s ok or not?
  
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  - Miles Rost
    March 23rd, 2014 at 11:03 pm
    
    I think he was killed and replaced by a plant monster that’s out for people’s cats.
    
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Al
March 23rd, 2014 at 10:41 pm

That was f’n brilliant 😀 I loved it.

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- David Stewart
  March 23rd, 2014 at 10:57 pm
  
  Thanks. I felt like trying something different.
  
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  - Al
    March 23rd, 2014 at 11:01 pm
    
    And it worked so well. It reminded me of a tweet thing from a couple of years ago that was the run up to the release of a game on the XBOX.
    
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J. Raven
March 24th, 2014 at 3:53 am

That was amazing! LOVED it!! Great idea~

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Hala J.
March 24th, 2014 at 5:23 am

This was hilarious and pretty spot-on when it comes to Twitter-world. I really got into the kind of language used and the hashtags. It was kinda creepy too, but mostly tickled my funny bone. (taco hell suuuuksss)

If different is what you’re going for, you definitely accomplished it!

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EagleAye
March 24th, 2014 at 10:50 am

Oh, that’s a dirty rotten trick! I love the tweet format. That’s just brilliant. I like the wat you’re keepin’ it modern and current. Very cleverly done!

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- David Stewart
  March 24th, 2014 at 11:06 am
  
  Do you think it was really him tweeting that last one though? I thought of it as someone else, taking his phone.
  
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  - EagleAye
    March 24th, 2014 at 11:31 am
    
    Ohmigosh! You just yanked the rug out from under me. It could be! Now it’s back to seriously spooky again! Very inventive David. You really outdid yourself with this one.
    
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  - misskzebra
    March 25th, 2014 at 3:08 am
    
    That’s what I assumed. I love how this is done in quite a humorous way, with the hashtags etc, but is still actually quite creepy!
    
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sharmishtha basu
March 24th, 2014 at 9:55 pm

brilliant story David. the climax was simply amazing! surprise!

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Steven Lindbergh
March 24th, 2014 at 10:10 pm

Now, that is a cool idea. Your creativity sets the pace.

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Adam Ickes
March 25th, 2014 at 12:03 pm

Haha. That was a very creative take on the prompt. Loved it.

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patriciaruthsusan
March 26th, 2014 at 5:51 am

That was very different but effective. Also, if that wasn’t him, it’s scary. Creative and well done.

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- David Stewart
  March 27th, 2014 at 8:33 am
  
  Thank you, Patricia. It is different, a little too different for a lot of people I think. 🙂 I was trying to make it clear through the vast change in style and diction that it wasn’t him, but I could have made it more obvious.
  
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nightlake
March 27th, 2014 at 11:34 am

this was good and the tweet showed the current trend. I think it was possibly not him in the end.. someone else is probably misleading

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Luddy's Lens
April 13th, 2014 at 2:14 am

I don’t know why, but “#poll” made me laugh out loud (the real thing, not “lol”). Exactly what an idiot bro-dude would do!

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